Name: Kay
Class: 1A
Title: A day at the beach
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Two weeks ago, I went to the beach with my friends.
We played volleyball and frisbee, and frolicked in the sun.
After a while, we got bored and started building a sand dog.
The people beside us were amazed by how realistic it looked.
By some freakish act of nature, the sand dog resembled Cheese's Pepper.
Soon our stomachs started growling and everyone agreed on Jap food.
Sushi never tasted so good.
During dinner, I suffered from spastic facial muscle attack suddenly.
Fortunately, I recovered after the waiter threw a pail of fish over my head.
We parted after dinner, and I proceeded to part two of my journey.
It was a wonderful day.
The End.
2 comments:
primary one standard you will get full marks lor! add in pictures...extra bonus marks!! haha
I'm not sure 6 year olds have "frolick" "facial attack" etc in their vocabulary?!
I think your mum has been doing your homework for you. Please ask her to come into school to see me tomorrow.
Miss wonderingweis
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